The Conclusion

As I read through my blogs I noticed that they started to decrease in length as months and months went by. I use a lot of short sentences in my writing along with repeating ‘because’ and ‘but.’ I also have a habit of using to many pronoun in my writing. My writing style still needs to develop and I can do this by using a thesaurus. I think my best blogs were the extra credit ones because they were more interesting topics. They weren’t about what we were doing in class that week. My blogs obviously show that I understand what’s going on in class. They have a thorough explanation even though they may be short. The meaning of my blogs all have a theme of children just because of the way I word things. I feel that I must work on writing at a more higher level. The picture of children symbolizes this. Even some of my blogs have to do with childhood such as the Disneyland blog or the one about when I was in fifth grade. I need to break free from writing like a middle schooler because I am in high school now. This lyric from Lifehouse is an example of maturing like I need to do in my writing, “The world I see inside you waiting to come alive.”